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| Art by: Ziegelzeig |
[Rating K9][Friendship][Slice of Life][Pretty Darn Cute]
Light on violence and heavy on fluff, While We’re Young will tug at your heartstrings. Nick and Judy work just as well together as kits as they do as adults with quality banter and kid-friendly shenanigans. The gang is all here, and together, Nick, Judy, Gideon, Clawhauser, and more will team up to make the struggles of their lives more bearable. What if Judy was there when Nick was muzzled by the Junior Ranger Scouts? What if Nick could stick up for Judy when Gideon bullied her? If you’ve ever pondered these questions, While We’re Young is right up your alley. – Mordecai
Author: Dizzie HamHam Writer
Description :
An AU story of Nick and Judy meeting each other as kids. Judy Hopps, a little bunny from the small town of Bunnyburrow and Nick Wilde, a little fox from the huge city of Zootopia. As Judy prepares for her play for the Talent Show, Nick’s family plans their first trip outside of the city. So what happens when that trip is at the town of Bunnyburrow?
Additional Tags: Why are Nick, Judy, Clawhauser, and Finnick all the same age? Shush, it’s cute.
It's a good story but the constant grammatical errors, no separation for sections of each story and some intrusive aouthor's notes in the chapters themselves stop it from being as good as it could be. I'd suggest the author asks somebody to proofread and edit the story, because the premise is a strong one and there's a truly good story trying to shine here.